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Follow the dark red dotted line
and at the end you'll surely find
a clue, a whisper
to where this body of mine
has been dumped
and now awaits
it lies

Down the end of the dotted red line
you've found a clue of mine
dropped and forever lost
but soon enough our fates will cross
Just follow what my clue provides
But instead of following the dark dotted line
search for me from what's written inside
the note you found
this clue of mine

You've read the note, you've followed the line
now take a good look of what's inside
you smell the odor. So foul. Disgusting
you take the top but in the midst of lifting
you spot something horrid. You close it on me (why)
You are in silence. Shocked. Disturbed
You have found me.
You've read the note, you've followed the line
Now here you see where I've waited. Where I've lied.
Isn't it shocking? Aren't you terrifyingly disturbed?
To find my bloody, cold, dead body dumped
in a dumpster
near the ally
on the curb?
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wrote this on the 25 or oct.
This poem seemed really similar to my friend Savannah's she wrote a year ago.
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~WhitewoodPhantom Oct 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, you have a way with words, my friend! I do like how visual you were in this piece. Not many possess these visual talents of yours.
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~TheFallenCres Oct 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much ^^
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~WhitewoodPhantom Oct 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You are most welcome. *tips his hat to you, kindly*
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